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HELP WANTED

Sun Jun 4, 2006, 5:55 PM
I've been trying for a week now to pound out chapter four for my Make Believe series and so far haven't gotten much at all. Not even half a page. I don't know what's wrong with me. Just stumped all of a sudden. Maybe it's the call of summer that is taking away all my imagination? Maybe some of you out there can help me decide where to go next eh?

Make Believe: Part Four
-Silent Preacher-

Long ago,
There were whispers from the west,
Whispers of a grand temple,
The Temple of Dreams,
And in this Temple of Dreams,
Was rumored to be a portal,
A portal into the Land of Dreams,
Our Reality,
The imaginary knight trumped through the dense jungle region the west was known for,
As he hacked the branches and vines to make a path with his make believe sword,
He ran over the dragon that wasn't necessarily real's deal,
"Go to the Temple of Dreams, far to the west from here, lost beneath the jungles" he had told me,
"Find the temple, and use the portal said to be there, to go to the Land of Dreams, and find for me my Woman of Gem" he seemed to sound as if he was pleading with me,
"She is stored in a cave in the northern regions of the land, find her for me and you can have your silly Princess",
So that was the dragon that wasn't necessarily real's plan,
So the imaginary knight set out,
Traveling west through the forest that wasn't quite tangible,
Equiped with his most trustworthy make believe sword and sheild,
Ready to take on any unreal obstacle that would come his way,

That is all I have so far. If anyone who reads this has any suggestions. Please, comment for me! PLEASE?!
  • Mood: Meh..so so.
  • Listening to: Not listening to anything
  • Reading: Angels and Demons
  • Watching: Blue Collar Comedy Tour: One for The Road

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